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improvement meme

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that old picture bugged me so much, and I keep meaning to redo it, and so I finally did!
here is the new version: fav.me/d6j3ucm
:iconpervylinkplz: :iconpervydarklinkplz: (c) nintendo
original meme by :iconbampire:

EDIT
PLEASE, look at this one instead fav.me/d6j3ucm it's better
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TamarRei
This is a great improvement.
Your lines are much smoother and precise. Your colouring is also much smoother and consistent.
You've improved the motion of the pose. The first one is really stiff, yet their feet suggest that they shouldn't be quite so upright. 
The addition of details, as well as the omission/alteration of other details, really shows you putting in more work and thought to the look of the piece.
The expressions are improved as well. The second one is more  subtle, and yet more telling of the feelings during the situation.

Really great job. Keep it up!